SOAPSTone- "Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out"

Subject

The subject of Dave Barry’s “Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out” is the differences between men and women. The disparity between the genders is illustrated by two examples: cleanliness and sports. The cleanliness example shows women’s supposed higher emphasis on hygiene. The sports example illustrates male emphasis on athletic competition, while women purportedly remain indifferent.

Occasion

“Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out” was written during the late 20^th century. The essay’s time of creation is illustrated by the use of brand names such as “Windex.” Because that company was not a household name until recently, the essay wasn’t written very long ago. The probable place of the essay’s creation is America. The emphasis on baseball and action figures portrays stereotypical American pastimes.

The time and place of the essay’s creation influence the essay by determining the examples which Barry uses to demonstrate differences between genders.  …”We could actually feel the World Series television and radio broadcast rays zinging through the air...” illustrates the importance of setting on the examples, as the use of television and radio broadcasts is limited to a certain time period, and the importance of the World Series is highest in only a few countries.

Audience

Barry’s specific audience for “Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out” is American men. The author’s target audience is exhibited by the statement, “If you can imagine such a social gaffe.”  The social gaffe to which he refers is one which, as per his argument, only men would find objectionable, and so he assumes that his reader is probably male.

The author’s general audience for the essay is Westerners. The author’s general audience is shown by “…she gives me this look that she has perfected, the same look she used on me the time I selected Robert’s outfit for school and part of it turned out to be pajamas.” This shows Barry’s wider audience because he is self deprecating and as an extension, is poking fun at males as well as females- an approach that avoids alienation of women.

Purpose

Barry’s purpose in “Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out” is to amuse the readers. His goal of entertaining the audience is illustrated by quotes such as, “….I always get irate letters from women who say they are the heavyweight racquetball champion of some place like Iowa and are sensitive to sports to the point where they could crush my skull like a ripe grape, but I feel these women are the exception.” This quote demonstrates Barry’s purpose because here he provides an anecdote designed to entertain and amuse the audience. The purpose is further revealed by the statement, “…moving very quickly for a big man holding a baby.” This statement shows the purpose because Barry paints an amusing mental image for his audience.

Speaker:

Barry, an acclaimed humorist, believes in the import of humor. This value is illustrated by his consistent use of a light tone throughout this and other essays. The light tone demonstrates his belief in the import of humor because he uses humor as a forum in which to discuss serious issues. In this essay, the use of a humorous tone allowed Barry to amuse his readers as well as discussing an issue, gender roles, that is frequently accompanied by passionate, stubborn advocacy on both sides.

Barry, a former writing teacher for businessmen, also believes in simplicity and clarity of thought. This value is illustrated by statements such as, “The primary difference between men and women is that women can see extremely small quantities of dirt.” This sentence expresses a humorous sentiment in a straightforward, direct manner. This value is important to this essay because it allows the reader to further enjoy the piece without having to examine complex sentence structures.

Barry’s use of italics is evident in the statement “…a hormonal secretion takes place in women that enables them to see dirt that men cannot see, dirt at the level of molecules…” The use of italics allows Barry to further stress certain statements and add to the humor of the piece. In this essay, Barry chose to use italics to allow the audience to imagine a scenario more vividly because of the aid of emphasis.

Barry’s use of imagery is evident in the statement, “ When I hear the world ‘filthy’ used to describe a bathroom, I think about this bar where I used to hang out called Joe’s Sportsman’s Lounge, where the men’s room had bacteria you could enter in a rodeo.” This use of imagery allows the reader to imagine the squalor of the bathroom of which Barry writes. Such imagery is important to this piece because it allows the author to exaggerate gender differences in a manner that is amusing.

Tone:

Barry exhibits a light and humorous attitude about gender differences in “Batting Clean-Up and Striking Out.” These attitudes are expressed by the use of phrases such as “the opposite side of the dirt coin.” By using such phrases, Barry is joking about the issues which he discusses. The tone serves the purpose by allowing the reader to be more amused and interested. The tone does this because humor and lightness draw interest and dispel boredom. “That was how we felt [in reference to Poe’s ‘The Tell-Tale Heart’],” illustrates this because it uses light, simple words to make the previous paragraph more amusing and cohesive.